Interesting Sentence of the Day

The writing geek in me was fascinated by this opening sentence / paragraph to a short fiction piece by George Saunders in a recent New Yorker. Talk about being unconventional.

Twice already Marie had pointed out the brilliance of the autumnal sun on the perfect field of corn, because the brilliance of the autumnal sun on the perfect field of corn put her in mind of a haunted house — not a haunted house she had ever actually seen but the mythical one that sometimes appeared in her mind (with adjacent graveyard and cat on a fence) whenever she saw the brilliance of the autumnal sun on the perfect etc. etc., and she wanted to make sure that, if the kids had a corresponding mythical haunted house that appeared in their minds whenever they saw the brilliance of the etc. etc., it would come up now, so that they could all experience it together, like friends, like college friends on a road trip, sans pot, ha ha ha!

2 Responses to Interesting Sentence of the Day

  1. Jude says:

    I suppose it’s interesting, but it makes me want to *not* read the story.

  2. harsh shah says:

    Check out the article on Shrek. It was a pleasure to read.

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